September 2024

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Sunday, September 29, 2024

WeWriWa: An Uncommon Kindness, HER TEXAS HERO


I’m taking a trip to the heat of Texas as a crisp, wet fall settles in. I’d LOVE this time of year if it just stayed dry as well as cool. Buuut in Michigan, we tend to get all four seasons in a random rotation from October to April. Today (Saturday, as I write this), it’s the blooming of autumnal colors beneath threatening rain clouds. A good day to stay inside and work on the W-I-P and to share another snippet from my WIP Dana Ransom historical, HER TEXAS HERO . . .

 The Excerpt 

Slitting her eyes open, Martine saw him sitting cross-legged on the other side of the fire, hands warming around a cup of strong-smelling coffee. His pale stare likewise heated at finding himself the subject of her attention.

“Hope I didn’t wake you, ma’am. Was trying to be quiet.”

“Y-you didn’t.” Was that hoarse rasp her voice? “I’m sorry . . . if you told me your name I’ve forgotten it.”

“Not surprising, ma’am, as we weren’t formally introduced. It’s Randall Bass, and the one snoring over yonder is my cousin, Carson.” He didn’t ask what he should call her, thankfully willing to give her time to offer that up when comfortable enough to do so.

(. . . and a bit more . . .)

A shiver rippled through her. From lack of appropriate clothing and delayed shock after all that had happened, Martine guessed while struggling to sit up. Her rescuer started to offer a helping hand then quickly caught it back before he alarmed her. An unexpected kindness from a Texas-bred man. His dark head nodded toward the cup in his hand.

“Sorry to say this is the last of the coffee. Expected to be in San Antone today, so we didn’t bring extra. You can finish this up to warm you . . . if you don’t mind the sharing.”

A near-hysterical laugh caught in her throat. As if the swapping of a little spit with a stranger would be the worst thing she’d exchanged. She drew a deep breath and forced a poor semblance of a smile.

“I appreciate the kindness, Mr. Bass, and I don’t mind at all.”

“Randall,” he corrected quietly as he slowly moved the cup toward her, “and just Rand is fine. What can I call you?” He didn’t ask for her proper name, again with that uncommon sensitivity.

“Marti,” she whispered, taking the tin with a cautious brush of fingertips, noting his were rough and warm . . . and as gentle as his tone.

“Careful, it’s still hot,” he advised as a grin creased his tanned face, releasing a devastating amount of natural charm, “but if you don’t mind me saying so, you don’t look like no Martin I ever met.”

I just love these characters and they’ve been waiting for far too long to have a finished story that will endcap my favorite historical series. Launch book, TEMPTATION’S TRAIL, is still my go-to for a satisfying read, and hasn’t aged a bit since its release in 1994 – one of the perks of writing historicals. The characters are every bit as fun and frustrating as they were from day one.

Sorry, got to be going. My characters don’t want to be left out in the cold, and I’ve got other blogs to enjoy (but don’t tell them that!).


Weekend Writing Warriors is a weekly hop for everyone who loves to write! Share an 8 to 10 sentence snippet of your writing on Sunday. Visit other participants on the list and read, critique, and comment on their #8sunday posts.

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Sunday, September 22, 2024

WeWriWa: Back to the Keyboard with HER TEXAS HERO


You don’t realize how far removed you’ve gotten from the things you love until you open your WIP and see the last entry was over a month ago. And that was to do some editing, not to create new material. Michigan Romance Writers to the rescue! Our off shoot of the former ROMANCE WRITERS OF AMERICA is still going strong with monthly meetings both in person and virtual but the highlight has always been our writing retreats. In July, I got back to the business of writing theeeeen slowly tapered off until my early morning hours at the keyboard were more for scrolling than creating paragraphs. I just couldn’t get BICHOK (butt in chair hands on keys) to create new words. The solution – an escape from that harsh reality with a writers weekend on the other side of the state with four other enthusiastic wordsmiths. Three days in a rental house on a wooded lot near Lake Michigan. Let the creating begin . . . on my historical western romance. Here’s a NEW sample from HER TEXAS HERO . . .

 The Excerpt 

Cool night air stroked across her cheek, coaxing Martine toward a reluctant wakefulness. Pain was the first thing to greet her, an exquisite agony battering every inch like a mixing spoon in a batter bowl. Fear came second, in a quiver of frantic alarm.

Where was she? What was she doing outside on the ground . . . and what had happened to inspire such spikes of dread and misery?

Instead of forcing her eyes open against the swelling determined to seal them shut, she reached out with her other senses to get an idea of her surroundings . . . and, unable to rely upon her tattered memories . . . with whom.

…and a bit more . . .

Then, circumstances came back in a brutal tide. Circumstances that crushed her spirit but didn’t explain her situation.

She was tucked into a quality bedroll by a campfire that cast warmth upon her face. A slow inhale filled in the blank of memory. Of cotton shirt and warm male. Of the young black-haired cowboy who’d caught her up in protective arms and quieted her with reassuring words.

“You’re safe. I gotcha.”

Over 30 new pages in three days (and that’s after reading the 90 already written to get up to speed . . . and still going strong since I got home. Now . . . to keep up with that habit of forward progress!

What have you found gets you out of a writing rut?


Weekend Writing Warriors is a weekly hop for everyone who loves to write! Share an 8 to 10 sentence snippet of your writing on Sunday. Visit other participants on the list and read, critique, and comment on their #8sunday posts.

Spread the word, share the love, warriors - Hashtag #8sunday.


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Sunday, September 08, 2024

WeWriWa: Born in the Swamps under a BAYOU MOON


After sinking my teeth into vampire lore from 1994 to 2002 with my “Midnight” paranormal romance series, my Pocket editor wanted me to jump to a fresh new series in the WooWoo-verse. My thoughts immediately seized upon something more hot-blooded. Something on two legs AND four. Not a werewolf, but a sexy shapeshifter protector in New Orleans. Though I ended up with my multi-book “By Moonlight” series, that’s not where I started out. Here’s a glimpse at my first shapeshifter project, BAYOU MOON . . .

 The Excerpt 

If it’s justice you after, it’s Reule Arnoux you wanting to see.”

Those words brought a shiver of reluctance when Shannon Harper had first heard them. They sat no easier now as the shallow pirogue slipped along glassy bayou waters, propelled by the leisurely dip of a single oar.

Shoving damp hair from her brow, she asked, “How much farther?”

“Up dare apiece.”

“Wouldn’t it be easier to just drive?”

“You cain’t get dare by da roads. Only way be through the bayou, same way folks been coming for generations.” 

The man’s whispery tone gave her a sudden chill. “Generations? What do you mean by that?”

“Only dat dare been one of his kind out dare where no roads can reach dem, where only those who need dem know where to go.”

( . . . and a bit more . . .)

His kind.  She didn’t know whether to laugh or tremble. If her guide was trying to scare her . . . it was working. “This Arnoux, is he some sort of bayou vigilante?”

“He be da law, da only kind we believe in.”

“But what can he do? I mean, he’s just one man—” 

When the boatman glanced over his shoulder, something in his expression dammed the rest of her words in her throat. Hairs prickled along her arms with the same chill she’d experienced as a little girl when warned by gruesome stories of the swamps and what happened there to the unwary and unwise. Was she being both?

“Lady, you be smart not to axe too many questions. Reule, he might not want to see you. He don’t like to take up for your kind, but since you kin to Douvee . . . we see what we see.”

Lafayette wasn’t Detroit. She’d been away so long, she’d forgotten the microcosm of distrust and ignorance of the isolated swamplands she no longer thought of as home.

It was crazy what she was doing, crazy and against everything she worked so hard to uphold. Under normal circumstances, she never would have considered taking such a step outside the avenues of law and order.

But nothing had been normal since she’d gotten her paternal grandfather’s letter stating that her father was missing, would she come?

I’d only written three chapters and a brief outline as requested by my editor. With fingers crossed, I sent it off . . . and waited. Sometimes, a swift response isn’t in your best interest. It wasn’t in this case. Nothing negative but no positives either. The series idea wasn’t “Big” enough for what she had in mind. Could I try something else? Could I? A closed window isn’t a closed door. I was on the hunt for a new bigger idea set in a more complex world of the paranormal. The hunt was on . . .

This project never went any farther. But the new one . . . that’s another story! I can’t wait to hear yours!


Weekend Writing Warriors is a weekly hop for everyone who loves to write! Share an 8 to 10 sentence snippet of your writing on Sunday. Visit other participants on the list and read, critique, and comment on their #8sunday posts.

Spread the word, share the love, warriors - Hashtag #8sunday.


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Wednesday, September 04, 2024

IWSG – Rules Made to Be Broken – by Me!


September 4th question – Since it’s back to school time, let’s talk English class. What’s a writing rule you learned in school that messed you up as a writer?

That’s an easy one! Complete sentences. (I love starting out with an example!) I discovered in elementary school that I was a writer. I LOVED playing with words. And as much as teachers encouraged my prose, they frowned on breaking the rules. Especially, that complete sentences one. (See what I did there?). By fifth grade, and up through my English with Writing Emphasis honors degree, my papers were used as examples of vivid writing – and dodging the rules. I blame Batman. Pow! Bam! Biff! Nothing like a short, punchy exclamation to elevate the heart rate. Even in college, as an English major, my work was used (anonymously!) as examples of quality prose, but also for its rule breaking. Newspapers, both local and university, always wanted me to do feature interviewing for them, but I was too shy to make the person-to-person connection. Page-to-Person, now that was altogether different.

When I first published, the incomplete sentence continued to haunt me. I love me a one-word sentence. Boom. Attention grabbed. Copy editors jumped on them, but by the time I built a track record (and garnered a few awards), they let them slip through. Warning: Short, punchy sentences need those flowing, expository sisters to hang out with them for balance and emphasis. And flavor.

What rules have you bent or broken?



Purpose: To share and encourage. Writers can express doubts and concerns without fear of appearing foolish or weak. Those who have been through the fire can offer assistance and guidance. It’s a safe haven for insecure writers of all kinds!

Posting: The first Wednesday of every month is officially Insecure Writer’s Support Group day. Post your thoughts on your own blog. Talk about your doubts and the fears you have conquered. Discuss your struggles and triumphs. Offer a word of encouragement for others who are struggling. Visit others in the group and connect with your fellow writer - aim for a dozen new people each time. The awesome co-hosts for the September 4th posting of the IWSG will be are are Beth Camp, Jean Davis, Yvonne Ventresca, and PJ Colando!

Let’s rock the neurotic writing world!

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