November 2022

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Sunday, November 27, 2022

WeWriWa: “What’s Next?” – A Risk-Taking Ranger


It’s the end of the trail . . . at least that’s what it looks like to the heroine in my romantic suspense, A RISK-TAKING RANGER. And it’s “The End” for me as well as this latest project wrapped up yesterday on page 315 at 80K words after a very satisfying read-through. I can certainly relate to this scene’s reluctance to let go . . .

 The Excerpt 

“So, what’s next?” Nora looked to him then frowned when his set expression grew even more remote. Her tone sharpened. “A little late in the game to ask me to step aside for my own safety, Ranger Bass, so I wouldn’t suggest you go there.”

Silence thickened like the dust cloud billowing behind them until he finally got to what darkened his mood.

“It’s time for you to head back to that comfortably messy apartment in Chicago and let us do our job without having to worry about you, too.”

Her jaw dropped. Even expecting him to come up with something equally unacceptable in the macho department, those words cut deeper than simple exclusion from their case. He wanted her gone, out from under his feet, out of sight and mind and potentially heart. For a moment, she couldn’t think around the huge swell of hurt. She waited for some contentious warnings and arguments to resurface but none did . . . because he was right. 

(…and a bit more…)

Worrying about her was no help to the task set before him. All she’d done was tangle about his feet like an overly eager annoyance that distracted him from what he needed to focus upon. What Lenna Lupan needed him to focus upon.

She sat back in her seat and stared straight ahead toward the destination she no longer anticipated—the end of their collaboration and whatever it might have led to beyond her goal to protect other innocent girls from being carelessly discarded.

So, when Zayn rolled to a stop to drop her off by the dumpsters like trash that had begun to smell, she was out of the car and striding toward the casino entrance without a look back over her shoulder. Nothing to see there, anyway.

Now comes the really hard work . . . deciding what to do with that finished book. First, I’ll be sending it out to a couple of readers to search out those dangling participles/pieces of plot line. Then it’s decision time: Traditional or Self-pub? It’ll probably be an after the first of the year issue, but I’m not concerned about finding something to do in the meantime...


When you reach the end of one trail, it’s time to start on another. While I’m waiting to find out what will happen with my romantic suspense, I’m going to do something I’ve wanted to do for a loooong time – take a trip back to the past, not just historically but into my own publishing history. And the best place to start, as far as Dana Ransom is concerned, is at the beginning of my Bass family Texas historicals. It’s not going to be quick or easy because I’ll have to hunt for text files for the books. Time to scour my office nooks and crannies to see what might turn up . . . and give it a good cleaning while I’m at it!

But first, time to go revisit those Thanksgiving leftovers to enjoy while I see what you’ve been doing.

Giving Thanks for all of you!!



Weekend Writing Warriors is a weekly hop for everyone who loves to write! Share an 8 to 10 sentence snippet of your writing on Sunday. Visit other participants on the list and read, critique, and comment on their #8sunday posts.

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Sunday, November 13, 2022

WeWriWa: “Reflections” A RISK TAKING RANGER


Now that I have your attention . . . How we see ourselves is every bit as important as how we see each other. Maybe more so, considering our view of self, determines how we interpret everything around us. Some of us have panoramic views – taking in the big picture without ever narrowing it down to make it personal. Some have a scope so narrow there’s no room for broader horizons. And sometimes, it’s all in the appreciation of one moment, of what’s right in front of you . . .

 The Excerpt 

A gasp.

Clearing his eyes with a corner of damp terry cloth, Zayn found himself facing an unexpected guest. The towel was whipped down to cover his immodesty just a second too late.

Nora Prescott sat unblinking on his couch. Rounded eyes slowly lifted from bunched terry cloth to startled face. A lengthy silence hung between them until she made a distracted gesture toward the door. “Tommy gave me your extra key. I thought I’d wait . . .”

His lips twitched. “For the floorshow? You’ve got the best seat in the house.”

and just a little more of a peek . . .

A strangled sound escaped her, half snort, half laugh as dark eyes subtly detailed damp toweling. “And me, without quarters.”

Zayn stretched out one hand to snag his clothes off the desk chair then backed toward the open bathroom door. “I’ll be just a second.”

A smile twitched. “I’ll wait.”

Tracking backwards onto the wet tiles, he shut the door before turning . . . right into his reflection in the full-length mirror. Which had undoubtedly provided a nice rear view for his guest.

Well, hell . . .
I never thought spending over an hour looking through pictures of naked men wrapped in towels would be such a chore. But finding my ideal for Zayn Bass was worth the hard work. You are welcome! Revisions are done and I’m doing a read through before deciding what in heck I’m going to do with this project. Part of me wants to try traditional publishing again. I have fantastic contacts who would at least look at what I send. But then there’s the instant gratification of going indie and having full control. What do you think??

I think I’m going to spend the rest of the day (after checking in with your excerpts) cuddling my youngest (and biggest!) cat who just went to the vet for an eye infection. The joy of holding a 13-lb big baby (all muscle and claws!) still to put goop in his sore eye while telling him what you’re doing is good for him, without having him rip you to pieces. The good news - he can be bribed with food.

I’m going to be gone next Sunday. My D-i-L and grandguy are meeting us at a halfway point restaurant to celebrate our family Thanksgiving. No clean up! Woo Hoo! If you celebrate, have a wonderful Turkey Day -without getting too stuffed!


Weekend Writing Warriors is a weekly hop for everyone who loves to write! Share an 8 to 10 sentence snippet of your writing on Sunday. Visit other participants on the list and read, critique, and comment on their #8sunday posts.

Spread the word, share the love, warriors - Hashtag #8sunday.


Nancy on the Web



Sunday, November 06, 2022

WeWriWa: “Husband Material” – A RISK-TAKING RANGER


Finally! Sitting down to start revisions for my new romantic suspense, A RISK-TAKING RANGER. Meet Texas Ranger Zayn Bass (yes, he IS related to Harm Bass, the hero in my Texas historical series!!). Family is everything to Zayn – because he’s never really had one of his own, except for the one he vicariously enjoys through his best friend. That’s who he is, and here’s a taste of what he isn’t . . .

 The Excerpt 

After some vigorous scrubbing of hair and bared upper bodies, Lu’s sister Ela provided towels along with a lingering once over of their guest that earned her brother’s derisive snort.

“It’s not like we didn’t swim naked in the river when we were kids.”

Full, red lips pursed. “We’re not kids anymore, brother.” Shooting Zayn a naughty wink, she sashayed back into the house.

Lu shook his head. “I need to track down that no-account that left her and her baby for parts unknown and drag him back to make good . . . or at least, cut her loose so she can find a decent man.”

Zayn blinked. “Not looking my way, are you?”

(and a bit more . . .)

Narrowed dark eyes assessed him. “Oh, hell no! She deserves someone who’ll come home every night to sit at her table instead to camping out on stake outs or going undercover for weeks at a time while she waits at home losing sleep.”

Though his friend’s assessment delivered an unexpected sting, Zayn couldn’t frame an argument. He was no prize as future husband material and nowhere near what a woman needed to help her raise such a vivacious daughter. Besides, he was already wedded to the job and content to enjoy casual encounters when they arose . . . as long as he could walk away without ties or obligations. The same way the two who’d made him between them had.
This baby was started over a YEAR ago while vacaying in Ireland. Not my usual speedy work but then these aren’t the usual circumstances, either. I’m now retired with all the time in the world to binge-watch, sun soak with my cats, and sleep in (which I still don’t). Instead of sticking to a stringent schedule of chapters written (sorry NANO!), I’ve been wandering along without an outline (another first and a BIG no-no for me!) and now that the book is finished, it’s time to tighten up that prose (and my lazy waistline) and get to work making this first draft lean and mean. It’s time to start that climb . . .


The big question is: Now that I have all the time in the world, how come it seems like I can never find any?


Weekend Writing Warriors is a weekly hop for everyone who loves to write! Share an 8 to 10 sentence snippet of your writing on Sunday. Visit other participants on the list and read, critique, and comment on their #8sunday posts.

Spread the word, share the love, warriors - Hashtag #8sunday.


Nancy on the Web



Wednesday, November 02, 2022

IWSG: NaNoWriMo – “If Not . . . Why Not?”

November brings about one of our profession’s biggest events: National Novel Writing Month. The goal – to getter done. Whether it’s your first attempt or the latest in three dozen, it’s fire up your computers in a race to meet a word count goal of 50,000 and finish your book in thirty days. Founded in 1999 by Chris Baty and a group of writer friends in Northern California, it’s Ready Set Go on November 1st in a challenge that ends at 11:59 pm on November 30 to draft a new book or redraft an old one by month’s end. Writers to your keyboards . . .

Our November 2nd’s optional question is “Have you ever participated in NaNoWriMo, and if not, why not?”

I’ve never been one to work under pressure other than what I apply to myself. I’ve written under and met publisher and personal deadlines for some 30-years, completing over 70 books. For me, it’s a personal thing, creating scenes and characters by my own circadian rhythm as time and inspiration allows. My motto has always been if you are forced to write, your writing is forced at best. It’s not the work of your heart if it’s work under pressure. And I don’t respond well to stress . . . at least at my age.

I know, I’m taking this WAY too seriously. It’s a challenge that’s meant to be fun and enjoyed. But for me, outside competition makes me freeze up. It’s like dogs chasing the rabbit on a track: A frantic race with blinders on that doesn’t even net a mangled rabbit. But that’s JUST me! Many of my writer friends swear it’s just the push they needed to get their project done. Me, I don’t like pressure or the thought of competition when it comes to something so intrinsically personal as my written words. Again, that’s just me.

To those of you who enjoy putting your feet to the fire, I’m cheering you on this November! Remember to hydrate, to stretch, and to get enough sleep. And bathe. That’s a good thing for the sake of everyone downwind. May your words have wings, your mind race free, and your pages accumulate into a novel you can proudly sell (after a good week of sleep and editing!).



Purpose: To share and encourage. Writers can express doubts and concerns without fear of appearing foolish or weak. Those who have been through the fire can offer assistance and guidance. It’s a safe haven for insecure writers of all kinds!

Posting: The first Wednesday of every month is officially Insecure Writer’s Support Group day. Post your thoughts on your own blog. Talk about your doubts and the fears you have conquered. Discuss your struggles and triumphs. Offer a word of encouragement for others who are struggling. Visit others in the group and connect with your fellow writer - aim for a dozen new people each time. The awesome co-hosts for the November 2nd posting of the IWSG will be Diedre Knight, Douglas Thomas Greening, Nick Wilford, and Diane Burton!

Let’s rock the neurotic writing world!

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